this poem sucks
It’s not what I want
I just go on,
On your own,
It doesn’t matter what you say or do,
It won’t change the way you,
Go down.
I could cry,
Right now,
Just so,
You know.
Laughing with tears in my eyes,
Closing my mind,
My pride,
Oh please,
Take me down with you.
I don’t know,
If I want to stay or go,
But wherever it is,
The place where you find your peace,
I will bring you there on my bleeding feet.
-Max
this poem does not suck at all :)
Laetitia said this on January 16th, 2008 at 22:45